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Old 10-03-2002, 12:46 PM   #6
Sharon Knettell Sharon Knettell is offline
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Firemen

Hi,

Your overall composition is good. I like the gesture of the hand on the shoulder. However, the man in the mask is off-putting. The other collasped figure is excellent and meaningful. It would have been more powerful if the standing man's face was showing and holding his mask so that the viewer could relate to him better. I realize that this was probably not a posed picture; keep it in mind for the future.
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